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Evaluating Neutral Minions (looking for feedback)

Hey guys! I’ve been drafting a series of articles for new Duelyst players for a little while now - August exams have gotten in the way and messed with my writing schedule, but I’m planning to have the series finished by mid-September, hopefully in time to catch new players joining through the Steam release. The only problem is that my articles tend to be rather long-winded - I’m conscious that there’s a lot of information that I want to share, but that more people will actually read it if it’s broken down into suitable chunks.

As such, I’m looking for some feedback on the first article in the series, Evaluating Neutral Minions - mainly about the length and organisation of the article, but any other constructive criticism would be really welcome as well. I’ll then finish the rest of the articles in the series in my revision breaks and start publishing them in time for September.

I think this post is suitable for General - it seemed to be pretty focused around Duelyst, but I’m happy to sort out any problems in regards to keeping the content suitable for the categories. I hope that you enjoy the article and I look forwards to your feedback! :smile:

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Well, the article seems great. :slight_smile: One thing I would like is to perhaps spread it out into smaller chunks, maybe pages. For example, you could have split it into a 7 page article with page 1 as the intro and table of contents, and 1 more page for each of the remaining sections. I think if you have lots of information to share, then that’s great, but looking at such a massive amount of text… it’s kind of a lot, and smaller chunks feel more manageable.