Looks solid although the lack of zendo seems criminal, and it seems a bit low on card advantage as well as removal.
Id consider trading phoenix fire for a transform of either OBS or Painter, and I would probably cram Zendo in over ki or expert. I am also not sold on the katara/kaido package.
Here is my suggestion, allthough take it with a grain of salt as I am no songhai expert.
Gets in some of Kals usual staple powerhouse cards, and while I did not add extra draw I uped the curve.
(I assume budget was not an issue as you had spirit to burn on Massacre, but if it is your version is still quite solid, although card advantage is still an issue so Id recomend perhaps Soujner over ki or kaido, or maybe even replicant over katara)