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Abominator Contest (by DieMango)

Really like idea one…

Very cool ideas…

I was a big fan of the SCP universe once and found the depictions of the creatures from H.P. Lovecraft interesting…

Got kicked out of a game-protject once because my way to draw monsters is to horrorfying :smiley:

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Very interesting…like Moat Lurker in HS as an proactive ability…

But try to simplify the wording…its very confusing and coud be more simple and nicer to read…

i would if i could, i’m an asian and my english is utter garbage lol. sorry

Perhaps a simpler text would read;
“Immune to damage. Whenever this minion kills another minion, store it. Can store up to 3 minions.
Dying Wish: Summon all stored minions nearby for your general.”

Hope that helps. :smiley:

but that’s not done, the minions needs to be abominated, have to explain that it’s immune to minion damage only, has to explain that the resummoned minion are ours etc.

I am Asian-german ;3

Maybe ,This minion is Immune to minion-damage.Up to 3 minions killed by this minion will be resummoned when it dies. The health is transferred into attack leaving them at 1 health’’

Welp…sounds more like a Yu-ghi-oh card description but sounds better…i think…

to be honest, i might be able to make it shorter like you said but, i’d have to delete words such as “eats” “abominated” that i like a lot.

i really like the concept art you make, and it instantly inspire me to the word eat and abominated, those are keywords i don’t want to part with. i really don’t care about the contest, i just found the art and name fits perfectly.

if i can’t win the contest because my text are too long and it doesn’t fit in an actual card then i can completely understand :frowning: but just don’t take the eat and abominated away :frowning:

I just wanted to point that out for the users to understand better :smiley: You can still win because i didt say it has to be formatted nicely and such…

now that i checked the others post’s they are so well versed and easy to understand.
i don’t know man, can i keep my card idea description as is?

edit: i did simplify it a little.

sure…

Was just a suggestion. So that the jury can read it better and the forum can decide better. I think the most people shoud understand after reading it a few times ^^

haha i think i’m screwed lol. anyway amazing contest man. loving it.

Welp, I read that poorly, and completely on my part. :disappointed_relieved:

The minion. The Pet is meant to be exploitable to kill the “parent” minion, but at the cost of whatever hitting it taking 5 damage. I’m thinking of reducing the cost 5 or increasing the heal proc to two.

I’d consider playing it in a Lurking Fear deck to keep getting 3/2 Walking Bombs from your other dying wish procs.

Also it should look like a big Yeti with a Bomb Belly summoning little Bombchu’s.

Abominator - Neutral - Minion - 5 mana - 4/4

Opening Gambit: Add a random Madness card to your action bar.
At the end of each turn add a random Madness card to your action bar.

Twisting Madness - 1 mana - Turn a minion near a friendly Abominator into a 2/2 Wailing Horror

Swarming Madness - 1 mana - Spawn 2 Voracious Swarms near a friendly Abominator - 2/2 Minions with Deathtouch.

Crushing Madness - 1 mana - Give all minions near a friendly Abominator -2/-2

Endless Madness - 1 mana - Give a friendly Abominator +1/+1 and Rebirth.

Escalating Madness - 1 mana - Give a friendly Abominator +4/+4.

Not quite in shape to make cards right now, I think. -_-"
But I think this idea might be cool.

P.S. Edited per @DieMango request :stuck_out_tongue:
P.P.S. Realized it was too weak and edited it once more.

Defently interesting…maybe give the rebirth one also +1 health so that i can look back to the good old times where veteran silithar was a thing…

Hmk…

I realized that i didt say ,JUST ONE THEME PLS!’’

Its very cool that you all make multiple concepts to the diffrents themes but i really cant rate everything (because stupid me didt realized that so many entries will come…and i am bad at rating…and i was not thinking about the problem of very similar effects because of the theme…so i cant decide D:)

Please choose just one entry and pls change the comments to 1 entry for 1 person…

Sorrry…

PS: Sprite is coming…maybe i torch my ass with magnesium to get enough motivation to make a attack animation…

I’m just here to say I missed your ellipses. Also, if this is a contest, add a deadline!

Ellipsis?

Sorry when i didt understand…ummm…i did made a deadline :disappointed_relieved:

Ellipsis is ‘…’ :>

And by deadline I meant to write the actual date for the end of the contest. People are usually too lazy to check out the creation date of the thread and add 14 days.